Ki-O-Rahi Group Reflection

 Yesterday our class went to a tournament in Tautoro. Here is our group reflection about it. There are photos underneath it.

Figurative Language.

In class, we have been learning about figurative language and what is the difference between figurative and literal.

Knowledge Of Text Types

Our topic is water and science. we have been learning to us ideas and information about how tecknowledge can help scientist monorter the rivers. The text fetures we use are titles sub headings Diagrams photograth/imagines Lead sentences

My science Experiment

 In class we went on a science trip. To test the velocity of the waiting river.

Jonah Gets Angry At Gods Forgiveness

In class we have been learning about forgiveness. Today we learn about Jonah's reaction Forgiveness to God

WALT use study the bible to gain an understanding that we all need  God's help, mercy, love and we are all called us to forgive others.
 
The Bible records many stories about "forgiving". The Lord Jesus also taught us like this: when we forgive men when they sin against us, our heavenly father will also forgive us. However, it's hard to forgive from our hearts. With God’s help you can forgive. 
 
Your assignment is to research "forgiving", in the bible and share what you learned. You will need to use reference material such as biblegateway.com or search engines to locate stories of forgiveness in the Bible.
 
Begin by brainstorming possible topics and bible references
 
Create your own framework to record bible references you will read, key events within it and your thoughts. In week 8 you will use this to write what you learned from the bible about forgiveness. 
 

How did I go ⚫   ✅    ✅✅     ✅✅✅	My self assessment
I can use reference material to locate starting points (bible stories) relevant to forgiveness	✅✅
I can create a framework to record my key ideas and notes	⚫
I can read the bible independently	✅✅✅
I can use my notes to write about what I learned about forgiveness	✅✅
Teacher comment

Thirst

 In class we read Thirst, our task was to make up own ending to the story 
I think I have done the following well:
Something I still need to work on is more figurative language understanding by 2A, Boy sentences,3 bad dashes, Direct speech,wow words and variety sentences.

¨Ryder!"dad shouted once more. Ryder heard him. What shall he do? He wondered what his parents would do to him if they ever found out. So Rhyder had to do something very fast so he started thinking what he should do. As he was looking around trying to find somewhere to hide he saw a tall figure coming down the steep stairs. So Ryder found a woodrod he could hide in so he ceekly hoped in and he was as scared as a cat getting chased by a bear.You little ugly,stupid,throught less boy-as dad yelled at Ryder. When Ryder peeked throuh the little whole in the wardrobe he saw dad and he was very angry at Ryder for what Ryder was doing. When dad was yelling at Ryder mum was getting worried. 

The next day dad seen Ryder and ask for forgiveness for yelling at him and saying all the hurtful words about him. So they all became thieves and was stilling water from other people. So they started to sell them to people that were in the same town as them. Because the lawn was parched, Ryder thought taking the water wasnt really a bad decision.

After Ryder went out side to take a breath. He realized that stealing form people is not right so he went to the neighbor and apologized to them. When he went over he saw a snarling dog and he got terrified but luckly the dog was on a chain. So he went inside so he could meet with mr porky and mrs baken. They were so disappointed  when they saw Ryder. When Ryder told them that he was the one that stole there water from them. They got very angry so Ryder asked them to forgive him. So Mr. porky and mrs baken forgave him.

writing show not tell

 I have been learning to use show not tell to make my narrative interesting. I do this I tried to have to describe what characters think and feel. This is a story I changed 

THE BIG RUGBY GAME

Orientation sports field and characters Two brothers) Problem do not get along - ones adventurous -  they act like good brothers

. There were once two brothers who were not at all alike. One was addicted to video games and a total game freak and the other was an in it to win it, person, he is a really sporty guy. Tom was big, fit, healthy, fast, and brave he was the team captain. Jerry was weak, unfit, and scared of being hurt and bullied by his team and older brother, but he was the smartest on his team on how to play rugby but was very unfit. 

 

2. One afternoon their Mother dropped them off at their rugby game. The team was getting ready but jerry was scared tom said: “get up you lazy boy and get ready to play”. They all went out and started to play. the big brother started to get scared because the other team was bigger and filter than the big brother. 

3. The big brother got bold over a few times but still fin they played and played and played until the big brother got hit and fainted so the little brother got up fear stabbed his hurt well he got up but his brother told him I believe in you so he started to play he played untill the game ended.

4. The little brother went to check on his big brother and he was fine. The little brother ran up to the big brother and gave him a big hug the big brother said “I never thought you had it in you”.