Thirst

 In class we read Thirst, our task was to make up own ending to the story 
I think I have done the following well:
Something I still need to work on is more figurative language understanding by 2A, Boy sentences,3 bad dashes, Direct speech,wow words and variety sentences.

¨Ryder!"dad shouted once more. Ryder heard him. What shall he do? He wondered what his parents would do to him if they ever found out. So Rhyder had to do something very fast so he started thinking what he should do. As he was looking around trying to find somewhere to hide he saw a tall figure coming down the steep stairs. So Ryder found a woodrod he could hide in so he ceekly hoped in and he was as scared as a cat getting chased by a bear.You little ugly,stupid,throught less boy-as dad yelled at Ryder. When Ryder peeked throuh the little whole in the wardrobe he saw dad and he was very angry at Ryder for what Ryder was doing. When dad was yelling at Ryder mum was getting worried. 

The next day dad seen Ryder and ask for forgiveness for yelling at him and saying all the hurtful words about him. So they all became thieves and was stilling water from other people. So they started to sell them to people that were in the same town as them. Because the lawn was parched, Ryder thought taking the water wasnt really a bad decision.

After Ryder went out side to take a breath. He realized that stealing form people is not right so he went to the neighbor and apologized to them. When he went over he saw a snarling dog and he got terrified but luckly the dog was on a chain. So he went inside so he could meet with mr porky and mrs baken. They were so disappointed  when they saw Ryder. When Ryder told them that he was the one that stole there water from them. They got very angry so Ryder asked them to forgive him. So Mr. porky and mrs baken forgave him.