It's So Cold

 In class we do a 'Cold Task' to find out what we already know. Our cold task was on narrative writing. This is a snap shot of what I can do in 30 mins by myself. 

We are learning to self-assess our writing so we know what we are good at and what we need to work on. 

What I want to improve on is I want to improve in my writing by using figurative language.

COLD TASK TERM 2 2022 NARRATIVE 

Write a narrative, this could be a story you make up or a whanau story you retell. 

Name: Hoone

One night tai and my cousin were playing a game called man hunt and tai was running after my cousin.But then when my cousin got clouse to the pool he discited to jump and he made it.but because tai was behind my cousin she tried to jump over the pool as well but when she went to go and jump she fell right in the pool.